I really appreciate your critique... and you're right. Some of the writing is quite dense and wordy. And as for Shannon's aversion to consistent glove-wearing... I don't think I really have a motive. Spite or sheer apathy.
Again, thank you for taking the time to thoroughly go over this piece. It's nice to see some constructive assistance.
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Thank you!
Date: 2006-02-02 07:05 pm (UTC)Again, thank you for taking the time to thoroughly go over this piece. It's nice to see some constructive assistance.