Ffff--you're right. It's Pacifica who's sitting there for a change. In my zeal to keep Shannon's dialogue connected, I got my modifiers crossed. TOLD YOU I only remembered a tiny bit. Thanks for pointing that out--I've fixed it now.
Need to go back through and add some notes, as well.
Thanks for being such a consistent commenter! Really helps to make these translations feel worthwhile.
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Date: 2015-09-04 07:49 pm (UTC)TOLD YOU I only remembered a tiny bit.Thanks for pointing that out--I've fixed it now.Need to go back through and add some notes, as well.
Thanks for being such a consistent commenter! Really helps to make these translations feel worthwhile.