Major Sturm looks far scarier than the lizard he has just dispatched.
I like the style you used i.e. present tense for the scene-setting, past tense for the events described.
(ギャレット - somehow "flat round flaky cake" doesn't have quite the oomph of garotte XD. However, galette in French does refer to any flat circular object, among other things e.g. money, CD/DVDs, though no relation to any sort of lasso)
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Date: 2011-10-07 04:42 pm (UTC)I like the style you used i.e. present tense for the scene-setting, past tense for the events described.
(ギャレット - somehow "flat round flaky cake" doesn't have quite the oomph of garotte XD. However, galette in French does refer to any flat circular object, among other things e.g. money, CD/DVDs, though no relation to any sort of lasso)