Raquel really is just so much more badass than I thought. And I thought she was pretty badass! I also like how straightforward she becomes when things are at their worst. "Our opponents are Purgers."
Being described as looking 14 would have been better. Still not legal(-appearing), but at least somewhat less creepy. OTOH, the creepiness is probably the whole point. Well, at least she can make Shannon blush on their very first meeting. That has to count for something.
You got the compulsive personality thing right, even, which is something I had forgotten about. X D (I love that line. It's very effective at conveying personality for being such a minor detail.)
That crops up a lot in Sutepri, at least for me. All kinds of things I don't even think about, these characters have actual reasons for.
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Date: 2011-08-27 04:56 pm (UTC)Being described as looking 14 would have been better. Still not legal(-appearing), but at least somewhat less creepy. OTOH, the creepiness is probably the whole point. Well, at least she can make Shannon blush on their very first meeting. That has to count for something.
You got the compulsive personality thing right, even, which is something I had forgotten about. X D (I love that line. It's very effective at conveying personality for being such a minor detail.)
That crops up a lot in Sutepri, at least for me. All kinds of things I don't even think about, these characters have actual reasons for.