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oneill[Content Notes]
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( Scrapped Princess | Canzonetta of the Unforgiven | The Songstress | Part 2/5 )
One tricky thing is that the narration tends to make these general sort of observations, and they often blend into story-specific ones. Like in this chapter, talk about high roads segues into an explanation of the specific high road that leads to Taurus. I keep going back and forth about whether to keep those bits in present tense (as though Dustvin, Manurhin, Taurus, etc. were real places, or as though magic actually existed) or to switch them to past tense like the rest of the story-specific narration.
[Disclaimer]
( Scrapped Princess | Canzonetta of the Unforgiven | The Songstress | Part 2/5 )
One tricky thing is that the narration tends to make these general sort of observations, and they often blend into story-specific ones. Like in this chapter, talk about high roads segues into an explanation of the specific high road that leads to Taurus. I keep going back and forth about whether to keep those bits in present tense (as though Dustvin, Manurhin, Taurus, etc. were real places, or as though magic actually existed) or to switch them to past tense like the rest of the story-specific narration.
