[Translation] Scrapped Princess | Prelude of the Stray Cat Princess | Epilogue and Afterword

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( Scrapped Princess | Prelude of the Stray Cat Princess | Epilogue and Afterword )

Man, I thought I could get this one knocked out yesterday since it's so simple, but the afterword took so many notes. Also I have a terrible track record for reading people's names, so--as always--if you know better, kindly leave a comment.

For clarity's sake, all the (?)s are Sensei's.

About the novel translations.

[oneill]

So! Now that the first volume is (finally FINALLY FINALLY) finished, I'm wondering what you guys would prefer to see next. Specifically, would you rather I continue on to the next volume or skip ahead to volume four, since that's where TokyoPop left off?

. . . of course, if badtzphoto or feliciter lacks access to the TP translations, then the decision is already made, as far as I'm concerned. Haha.

I've also been thinking of maybe going back through and changing some of the paragraph structures and such. For example, moving some attributions up to the same paragraphs as the dialogue they modify (which I actually did back when I translated the Prologue, lo these many years ago).

Any thoughts? Related to structural issues in general, that is. Basically anything you think might make the prose easier to read.