ext_76829 ([identity profile] evilredmenace.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sutepri 2006-02-02 07:05 pm (UTC)

Thank you!

I really appreciate your critique... and you're right. Some of the writing is quite dense and wordy. And as for Shannon's aversion to consistent glove-wearing... I don't think I really have a motive. Spite or sheer apathy.

Again, thank you for taking the time to thoroughly go over this piece. It's nice to see some constructive assistance.

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