I really appreciate your critique... and you're right. Some of the writing is quite dense and wordy. And as for Shannon's aversion to consistent glove-wearing... I don't think I really have a motive. Spite or sheer apathy.
Again, thank you for taking the time to thoroughly go over this piece. It's nice to see some constructive assistance.
Thank you!
Again, thank you for taking the time to thoroughly go over this piece. It's nice to see some constructive assistance.