badtzhobby ([personal profile] badtzhobby) wrote in [community profile] sutepri 2012-05-02 05:47 am (UTC)

Thank you.
I had to go back and read it more than a couple of times and there are parts I don't fully understand. There are many implications.

Raquel is brilliantly awesome and she's not even in the scene :)

Chris admitted he lost 2 times, that's got to be on purpose. It seems that he admitted he lost more than just that battle, right? It seems to imply that he's lost to their cause, or I read too much into this.

Winia's insight is great. She understood other people so well and she wasn't afraid to tell Chris, whom she had called a killer earlier.

The first drawing made Shannon look like a giant next to Chris. Is Chris that young? He looks like he's only in early teens. Shannon seems to treat Chris like an annoying and much younger cousin :)

I wonder about 2 mentions of a small child in the middle (I think depicting helplessness and loneliness of a child) and baby at the end (seems to mean reborn?). Btw, that drawing is scary.

"Moreover, every one of them had had his kneecaps shattered."
I don't understand why and who had done this to them, Galil? But aren't Peacemakers and Purgers in the same team as in both side are after Pacifica? Then later, give them power for their mission.

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